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Varg_Vikernes
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My Heavy Burden Jul 14 2011, 03:50 PM
I once upon a time Carried a burden inside Some will ask goodbye A broken line but underlined There's an ocean of sorrow in you Sorrow in me Saw movement in their eyes Said I no longer knew the way Given up the ghost A passing minds and its a fear In the wait for redemption ahead Waiting to fade Fading again If death should take me now Count my mistakes and let me through Whisper in my ear Taken more than we've received And the ocean of sorrow is you

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OnyxAngel
Posts: 833
Jul 14 2011, 07:45 PM
I got lost, but after reading it a few more times I finally got it. One word: Beautiful <3
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JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
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Jul 14 2011, 09:31 PM
Amazing, as usual with your poems :D

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