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RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
He was the guy Nov 15 2011, 01:59 PM
He said he'd fix me but he broke me instead he said i was the one but i was the fool he said he loved me but he knew the truth all i knew was lies he said i was his everything he became my everything controlling me he was i saw it more as caring telling me what to do with my life i saw it as guidance telling me who i cant talk to thought he was looking out for me but i opened my eyes i smelt my morning coffee he was a guy that was a player a guy who just wanted to bring me down i grew strong and i told him no i walked off and held my head high he was the guy who tried to break me he was the guy who failed.

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Nov 15 2011, 04:12 PM
Same stuff happens with girls and yea his loss!
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Nov 15 2011, 05:33 PM
For some reason when I saw the title I figured (once again) that you wrote this. I agree totally with Matt; his loss..what a loss indeed.... Glad to you were able to "walk off and hold your head high" though! *hugs*
RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Nov 16 2011, 09:40 AM
more my loss he was nice deep down .....
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Nov 26 2011, 04:56 PM
Awesome!! :) I love this! :) And i'm proud of you for being so strong! ^^ x
nezzyneon
Posts: 896
Nov 26 2011, 05:02 PM
your so beautiful....i agree with matt and vybz.....you deserve someone who treats you like a real princess! ^_^
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Nov 27 2011, 04:28 PM
We always think they're nice deep down after being away from them for a while. But you know, if they don't treat you right, they're not worth the attention you give them or the emotions they put you through.
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Nov 28 2011, 04:15 PM
^Best advice I have read today
RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Dec 01 2011, 09:36 AM
I guess so well bring on the next guy is all i have to say ahah
Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7255
Dec 09 2011, 04:58 AM
ur such a brilliant poet, RiRi :') <3 ur poems r always so touching ^-^ x

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