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I used to wanna kill myself Came up, still wanna kill myself OMFG, by Lil Peep

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Never Back Down Dec 01 2011, 05:45 PM
Never Back Down. I do everthing i like, Nothing can go wrong, My whole live can't get better, But who do i fool ? I am angry at myself for burning myself everytime on the same thing, Losing people close by my own doubts, My doubts are eatin every thought, Thinking of every little detail in my live, Reliving it rethinking it, Trying to blame others for my pain, Trying to to imagine a perfect live, Dreaming the perfect live, But i know i need to wake up, Back to the real live, Back to bein paranoid, Back to the struggle, Back to the shit that i pass in my live, But a little quiet place in my head, A little place that is my own, The little place where i fight for, The right to say i have lived my live without backing down, To be proud at myself, So i can say that i fight for the right to have a place among this world, I will never back down and give up, Because there is always somethin, Even if you can't see it, Somethin to fight for, Hope you enjoyed it. Feel free to comment and critize (: (if you want to tell me it doesn't rhyme i know that)

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LoversLoveLiarsLie
Posts: 41
Dec 03 2011, 04:37 PM
it doesn't always need to rhyme to be kool....I think it's great! ^-^ I didn't know you write poetry tho..congraaats!;D I wanna see more!!^-^
nezzyneon
Posts: 896
Dec 05 2011, 03:09 PM
^ i agree...poetry does not always need to rhyme, just have a nice flow to it :) excellent usage of words though and the feeling that it creates when reading it is astonishing! Keep it up ^_^
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xXkuraiyoruXx
Posts: 164
Dec 05 2011, 03:57 PM
I loved it :) and I never rhyme I mean I have notebooks upon notebooks full of poetry and non of them rhyme! But I loved you poem and hope to see more poetry from you :)

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