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Drowning Apr 22 2012, 01:48 PM
Drowning in Sorrow Deserted by a society you once belonged too. Suicidal thoughts engross your mind. You take a knife to end your life. Your wrists have been cut. Beads of red sweat drip from your wounds. As the light slowly fades. You are trapped in a sea of black. You begin to regret the choice you’ve made. But now it’s too late, your road has been paved. The pain is excruciating. You pray that you die Its only now you realize your life was a lie. Theirs no disguise as tears fill your eyes. You feel your heartbeat slow. You have no where to go. The lights are off. Blackness consumes. You lay dead. In a pool of your own blood. Please only constructive critism :) xoxo

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Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7245
Apr 22 2012, 04:05 PM
i <3 it :)
Emo Pictures - xXLostShadowXx
xXLostShadowXx
Posts: 16
Apr 23 2012, 09:29 AM
Sad but beautiful! <3

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