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StarlightSoliloquy
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Today Comes to Say Goodbye Jul 08 2013, 07:07 PM

Is it worry that catches your fall? is it sorrow that strenghtens your weakness? I'm sorry i wasn't there at all I would of atleast try to beat it Can you show me, a better way down? Can you show me, a better way out? I never sought to let this go but time just kept on repeating With your arms wide, mouth closed, eyes bright as the stars You smile and wave goodbye. Well I was too late to save you, well i couldnt forget that on that day you left my sould died in its depth A shallow cross between us, never made much sense as tonight, the morning reborn was nothing but and empty hollow night So break, break your fall So break, break it all I was once too far gone Im already done Cast 6 feet from within and ill break just to keep this from following me down through sin Well I was too late to save you Well i couldnt forget that on that day you left My soul died in its depth Morrow says goodbye, the night will cast down slow You never ever cried, until that last hello You stared all through the night, and left me white as snow creep on you in your dreams, and capture your black soul Today, Comes to say goodbye!! -- attatched is a link to the song

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Jul 08 2013, 07:10 PM

I like this! :D

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StarlightSoliloquy
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Jul 08 2013, 07:21 PM

thanks haha :)

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rebel-galaxy
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Jul 08 2013, 07:42 PM

thats so cool c:!!! i wish i could scream like that >.<

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StarlightSoliloquy
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Jul 08 2013, 07:45 PM

haha its not hard, i use to do it wrong becaue i never understood what using ur diaprham was, but its pretty much tightening your abdomen like your pushing out poop and forcing air from your stomach and amplifying it with whats called vocal fry, the easiest way to learn is start practicing vocal fry, examples are when you wake up in the morning and your voice is scratchy and groggy.

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jul 09 2013, 01:32 PM

I like it too :)

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SergeantJani
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Jul 09 2013, 09:38 PM

That was so beautiful :')

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StarlightSoliloquy
Posts: 34

Jul 10 2013, 03:21 PM

ha thanks man!

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StarlightSoliloquy
Posts: 34

Jul 10 2013, 03:21 PM

thanks everyone xD!!!

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xXZeroKidXx
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Jul 17 2013, 07:58 PM

right on man gooood job!!

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StarlightSoliloquy
Posts: 34

Jul 30 2013, 06:05 PM

thx zerokid

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