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Vybz
Posts: 1466

The Phoenix Prayer Nov 17 2013, 03:59 AM

Come Peace So I may sleep Sweet release Is all I need So That I May Breathe In the air around me And The pain inside set free Wake up now Little demon Stop sleeping in my chest I won't leave you buried there To die in my heart and rot Sweet peace Why are you hiding? Why do you run away I've been searching in the darkness And the light keeps getting further and further away Sweet light Come! Warm me! Don't let my heart freeze to death! This bitter anguish consumes me Now all I pray for is death... Sweet death Do Not Kill Me Yet Come! Quickly! Peace Just give me one night So that I may close my eyes: Let me die with some fire burning inside So that like a phoenix my soul will be reborn Into the night

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LipsOfDeceit
Posts: 2168

Nov 17 2013, 09:03 AM

Fantastic as always! :D

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Nov 17 2013, 03:36 PM

thanks! I still need to polish it up a bit... was kind of a reflective peace ( no pun intended)

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FullCircle
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Nov 17 2013, 05:19 PM

This was intense, dude. Nice work!

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Nov 18 2013, 09:44 AM

Thanks a lot, bro!

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18358

Nov 18 2013, 02:26 PM

Always look forward to your poems as you know :) Thanks for sharing!

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Nov 18 2013, 03:42 PM

:) thanks boss. It was my pleasure!

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