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xxxoutcast_lifexx
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I'm shxt at poems...so yeah :( Nov 18 2014, 03:00 PM

I can't even write your name anymore, Without remembering your entrance in my life, Through hells door. When you reached out your hand, Guiding me through the pitch black cave Only pushing me along to where i belonged in my grave. Whatever flower from the isolated graveyard which lied dead Contains the hope i had within me to express whats left unsaid My bleeding lips, from the hatred of the daggers you call "words" As the flower i received from you, in the woods is all that burns. Don't you dare try and lure me of my road i'm ment to go Until i leave the path escaping through the forests tress alone Feeling the sensation of your freezing fingertips that hold My bleeding heart that can't defreeze what's possesed my soul.

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Dec 11 2014, 06:20 PM

What the hell are you talking about "I'm shxt at poems.." This is pretty good. Better than some people in my creative writing class. This is some deep shit

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xxxoutcast_lifexx
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Dec 22 2014, 08:45 AM

Thankyou :)

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Dec 22 2014, 04:07 PM

I liked it too =]

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xxxoutcast_lifexx
Posts: 84

Dec 28 2014, 01:08 PM

Thanks i wasn't expecting any comments

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LordMelkar
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Dec 29 2014, 05:52 AM

wow this was a while ago you posted it. in all honesty it's a very good poem in my opinion. only problem is it doesn't sound quite right when i read it, like the lines feel a bit long to me (mainly the first 2, improved later with a comma).

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xxxoutcast_lifexx
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Jan 04 2015, 09:04 AM

Thanks for the tip. I thought something sounded wrong :/

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EzLivin
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Jan 14 2015, 07:51 AM

This is Damn good. I write poetry too and i actually learned something lol. Very well done.

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xxxoutcast_lifexx
Posts: 84

Jan 19 2015, 02:18 PM

Yay! I find that poetry comes best when i'm in a sucky mood xD

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