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poetryxisxmyxsheild
Posts: 187

My Hole Jul 01 2008, 09:59 AM

Still trying to escape this blackness This four side hole im in The walls continue to rise High above my head Now there closing in Suffocating me with its cold shadowed hands The pain the cuts the misery Is kill me now inside Its scared my arms My legs chest and stomach But now its wanting more More then a cut can make Just my final breath To escape the cold heartedness The hands and words That attacks me each and every day And no one seems to care They watch me fall And didnt try and help They watch at there distance With smiles on there faces Now they dont notice me Im invisible to there eyes I cry and search for help Only to be turned away So now the hole it tight against me I can not see the light Stuck in a hole Till I take the knife to my wrist Carve my story down my arm Now lets see there faces Now there crying Now there dyeing Cus they never noticed And they didnt really care

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18353

Jul 01 2008, 12:33 PM

Did you write this? It is obviously depressing, but well written.

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poetryxisxmyxsheild
Posts: 187

Jul 02 2008, 10:03 AM

lol yee i did write it

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xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7253

Jul 08 2008, 10:50 AM

beautiful^^

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poetryxisxmyxsheild
Posts: 187

Jul 21 2008, 09:07 AM

thankyou

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AllReasonGone
Posts: 116

Jul 21 2008, 10:14 AM

It's a great poem, but please rename it. I got scared at first glance [:

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jul 21 2008, 11:04 AM

Haha..

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Tantra_B
Posts: 3019

Jul 21 2008, 12:49 PM

Ahem, yes must say I did wonder about that myself xD

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victhevamp
Posts: 2303

Jul 21 2008, 12:58 PM

your all dirty minded! lol

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poetryxisxmyxsheild
Posts: 187

Jul 23 2008, 04:14 AM

AllReasonGone dirty shit what do you want me to call it?

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Avalanche
Posts: 97

Oct 15 2019, 01:53 PM

I'm just gonna bump this for no reason

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