Emo Scene Community

1000's of emo guys & girls!

Search soEmo

Top Emo Bands View All

Saosin
8.2
My Chemical Romance
8.2
Fall Out Boy
8.2
Orchid
8.2
Bring Me The Horizon
8.2

Emo Lyrics View All

Now You're Risking It All..For Some Pin-Up Doll. You're So Creepy, by Ghost Town

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
A poem Aug 04 2009, 11:41 AM
My head is spinning And I can't see My hair is falling I don't look like me My feet are swollen From running away My mouth is broken Ive got nothing left to say My fingers are aching And I can't feel My legs are getting tired Is this coldness real? My joints are ridgid And wearing away Too much time has been wasted I forgot yesterday Words mean nothing When they are hollow And now theres no one In this world i would follow Because this world isnt big enough For you and me Which one will fall first Wait and see.

Replies

Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Aug 04 2009, 01:20 PM
Hun you're works getting better in my opinion. It's easy to relate to which is always good. I love it, every work has it'd place and yours is getting closer to the top each time.
Deleted User
Aug 05 2009, 02:23 PM
WTF IS THIS SHIT?
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Aug 05 2009, 06:17 PM
^ its not shit it is a nice poem
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Aug 06 2009, 04:45 AM
If you can not understand emotional pieces of art (as poetry is an art form) then please do not comment. You are just like the critics of modern are and impressionism as they were first being introduced. Grow up please this is meant to be a peaceful community.
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Aug 06 2009, 05:25 AM

Add Reply

  • Please note: Comments soEmo.co.uk considers to be totally unrelated spam will be removed.

Featured Users View More