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xEvilEmox
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Just Another Online Dream Nov 19 2010, 01:26 AM

Just Another Online Dream Just another online shit And you call it a "relationship"?! When you lost your life you seek A way out of the nightmare's reek Another way into a dream So perfect, so worthless You live to ween In just another online dream ............. Just another online shit To get yourself out of a world That turned its back on you You struggle to fight the emptiness within And as you dream, you sink in So hot; so ecstatic, you sway into appetence In just another online dream ............. Just another online shit It continues to swell and rewind You lose all traces of reality You know you're gonna be left behind And as you close your eyes to slump So cold; so static You lay there numb To live and to die right in Just another online dream. … It's just another online dream …

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Nov 19 2010, 09:57 AM

I love this!

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dark-side-risenx
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Nov 19 2010, 03:58 PM

That was cool.

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Nov 20 2010, 01:36 AM

Perfect :)

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xEvilEmox
Posts: 264

Nov 20 2010, 01:59 AM

Thank you

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xSUICIDEBLOODx
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Nov 29 2010, 09:35 AM

a really thoughtful poem i like <33333333333333

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