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LastUltimatum
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We all suffer Jan 01 2011, 07:13 PM

He lays in his bed, thinking about the last 48 hours. She said she loved him, she promised joy. He fell for the lie. He trusted her. She misused his trust. She destroyed his belief in a normal life. Then his parents laughed in his face, forced him into the fetal position. Thew told him he was a fool, but he didn't listen. Look what happened to him. He had one last resort, he bowed down and prayed. He got an answer, and he figured his whole life out. God told him that he boloned oin heaven. He didn't believe at first, but got convinced. Clueless to the fact that Lucifer himself spoke to him. For one last time he was lied to. He called a meeting of everyone he was "close" too. He said goodbye and killed himself. He was confused, he woke up in a firery place. "where am I?" he asked. Then he realised, he was in Hell. He realised his mistake, who he conversed with. He ended up in a worse position then He then woke up, and went over these events. He then realised what his dream meant. Down stairs he seen his parents. Ge told them he was gonna die. They laughed. He found hios fathers belt, tied it. At the top of the stair well, he placed it up. He found peace in hell, because he isn't laughed at

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Jan 01 2011, 08:15 PM

O.o. another don't try this one at home kids! xD . well written though!

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JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
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Jan 02 2011, 03:19 PM

So sad :''( but deep and beautiful

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