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The walls start breathing My mind's un-weaving Maybe it's best you leave me alone A weight is lifted On this evening I give the final blow It ends tonight, by The All-American Rejects

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xRoseFallx
Posts: 176
Give up? Sep 22 2011, 11:01 AM
I want to let go No fighting No struggling Give into the tide that drags me Attempts to sweep me away I want to let the water take me And feel my tears pull to join it They want to paint clear lines down my cheeks And I want them to. Break through my resolve Break through my stoney facade And let myself give up I want to break down To watch and laugh as they take me away Take me away? Take me away Far away Take me Take my life Take over so that i dont have to think To feel myself fall yet hold myself back Away from the brink Because I have to be there for you But can't i just give up? Please? Let me fall So that I may sleep And rest peacefully So that my soul may ache no more...

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nezzyneon
Posts: 896
Sep 22 2011, 02:25 PM
omg i loved reading this :D great work! ^_^ You my dear deserve a round of applause :P
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18335
Sep 23 2011, 02:23 PM
Agreed!!
XxDestainyMassacrexX
Posts: 931
Sep 27 2011, 07:01 PM
Your poems are always soo amazing rose <3
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JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Sep 29 2011, 02:08 PM
I feel the same way x
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18335
Sep 29 2011, 02:12 PM
I can relate to them well too! Not always a good thing though I guess..
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Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
Sep 29 2011, 02:14 PM
i love the poem, i can relate a lot...
xRoseFallx
Posts: 176
Oct 10 2011, 10:04 AM
awww thank you guys :') <33

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