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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

_ShAdOwS_
Posts: 3
My First Ever..... Please Only Constructive Critism :) Nov 26 2011, 02:59 PM
Death Is Upon Us. Our Cards Have Been Dealt. The End Is So Close. It Can Almost Be Felt. When I Look In Your Eyes. I Can See Your Demise. Will You Be Able To Cope. Once You’ve Lost All Your Hope. You Have Been Warned. So Lock All Your Doors. Repent For Your Sins. And Beg For Forgiveness. And yes i dont have a title.......i cant tink of 1 :3

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nezzyneon
Posts: 896
Nov 26 2011, 04:11 PM
wow your first poem is amazing! just wonderful....the first part really touched me :) i would love to read more ^_^
_ShAdOwS_
Posts: 3
Nov 26 2011, 04:13 PM
really aaww thanks dat meens alot it took me lke 5 minz do so ill have 2 put mre tout in 2 my oder 1s :)
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JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Nov 26 2011, 04:53 PM
Good job for a first poem!
Deleted User
Nov 27 2011, 10:59 AM
That really good!!!!
Deleted User
Nov 27 2011, 11:00 AM
thanks :)
OnyxAngel
Posts: 833
Nov 27 2011, 12:27 PM
That's amazing.
Deleted User
Nov 27 2011, 12:42 PM
thanks :6
Deleted User
Dec 01 2011, 05:48 PM
Title: The Ace of Spades The card of death was the first thing that popped up in my head.
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bloodybrokenangel
Posts: 2
Dec 02 2011, 06:47 AM
I love it... its amazing:) (:

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