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flarencekun
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Tormented Soul of a Faithful Lover Aug 16 2013, 09:39 PM

Hovering in the great blue sky Feeling the breeze that passed my eye Though pain eats me at where I lie Happiness is not a bye-bye All through these tears with miseries It brings me joy with mysteries The pain, the hurt that don't decrease My gladness here, still increase No one can truly understand Passion I hold within my hand To care for you is oh so grand Forevermore, I sure will stand No one can ever comprehend This martyrdom, to you, I lend My sacrifice, more than a friend You don't care yet my love won't end All through these years of loving you Concern for me, you never do You're love for him out of the blue Had made my life to split in two Hovering in the deep black sky I still love you, I don't know why This very night you made me cry I came to think, "Is it bye-bye?"

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xXTeslaTafoyaXx
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Aug 17 2013, 08:11 AM

Wow, that's beautiful....

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flarencekun
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Aug 19 2013, 11:06 PM

thanks.,. :) it's actually a poem that i did due to a request from a girl named "HANNAH".,. as you can see., the initials of each stanza starts with "H-A-N-N-A-H" if you're going to tell me your name., maybe i can create one for you.,. although., the theme of the poem will be quite melancholic., hehe.,. xD

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