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xXxRossAsphyxiatedxX
Posts: 45

All I ever wanted. Apr 15 2010, 04:02 PM

Here's another one of my lame ass poems. I know most of you are asking if they're so lame why would I post it? well because I need to let my feelings out, so yeah, here goes nothing. All I want is for you to care. Take me out of this despair. This feeling is just so rare. And the pain's too much to bare. Give me hope or a sign, and help me kill some time. No poem or any rhyme can explain such a crime. I cry in grief and make it brief. I wish it was all, just make believe. I hope you know you are my world Without you I am very cold. All my love is what you sold, It was worth more than any gold.

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365

Apr 19 2010, 04:33 PM

i like it! it is very deep.

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xXxRossAsphyxiatedxX
Posts: 45

Apr 24 2010, 12:14 PM

awhhh; thank you. :)

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xEvilEmox
Posts: 264

Apr 25 2010, 06:04 AM

Magnificent! Simple yet so (expressive)! Something I can really relate to... Well done!

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xXxRossAsphyxiatedxX
Posts: 45

Apr 25 2010, 07:58 PM

awwwww thank you.<33

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