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I must abuse myself I'm against all that I've made up Take It Away, by The Used

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Stop and stare Feb 10 2011, 11:32 AM
Stop and stare at the life infront of you Stop and take in the air Listen to the birds singing They can take you there Stop and stare and the people in the street Laughing and loving The people they meet The brught faces the people having fun Everyone is starting But he is done. Lying in a hospital bed death is in his eyes I kiss his head and smile sing him a lullaby his eyes begin to close his breath begins to shorten The angels start to sing and take him to the Heavens.

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Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7255
Feb 10 2011, 11:40 AM
this poem was so sweet but sad too .. i loved it ...<3 it was brilliant <3 xx
RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Feb 10 2011, 03:09 PM
Aww thankyou <3
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Feb 11 2011, 03:46 PM
This made me want to cry...... It reminded me of when I watched my grandmother dying... The day of her funeral was as beautiful as what you described. The whole experience left a gaping hole in my heart... And I am touched by this poem because I feel like I share those feelings. My grandmother was the ultimate example of love. She was the most loving person I ever knew. When she left, I was torn. I still cry for her, and its been 3 years. I'll never get over it
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18358
Feb 11 2011, 05:07 PM
:'( lost for words.
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Feb 12 2011, 09:20 AM
This is probably the most beautiful poem I've read on here
RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Feb 12 2011, 09:46 AM
Aww thankyou so much !
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Feb 12 2011, 02:06 PM
Ur welcome :')
Emo Pictures - xXkuraiyoruXx
xXkuraiyoruXx
Posts: 164
Feb 12 2011, 02:55 PM
I love it its wonderful but sad. keep writing my friend. :'(
RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Feb 13 2011, 02:20 AM
Thankyou !
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Feb 13 2011, 08:29 AM
touching... beautiful...
RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Feb 13 2011, 11:11 AM
Thankyou

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