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Mind set on failure, The road you chose, Told me you loved me, Told me no. Darling, by Eyes Set To Kill

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Daddy Jan 04 2011, 01:41 PM
Daddy please dont die i need you here the things your doing their not right you throw you hit you scream at me. You cant sleep you wont eat you drink more alcohol than a pub full of people You forget me. You cant stand for more than a minute Your trembling all the time I get you help i get you support you reject me.

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Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7253
Jan 04 2011, 09:52 PM
Sad </3 I feel u twinny on that ! Its almost the same for my dad except for that with alcoholic problems and well my dad has rejected me too :'(:'(:'( well thanks to my mom who I hate by the way ! Then my dad doesnt wanna have contact with me anymore :'( well me and my dad had a deep connection that normal people doesnt have and for my mom to destroy that that was the final thing that shows that she hates me and I will do everything to destroy her !:@ I mean her life lol she has destroyed my life for the Fucking last time ! :'( x
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 05 2011, 04:59 PM
well written poem, nice use of structure and sharpness to bring out the feeling. Hugs you both*
Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7253
Jan 06 2011, 02:22 AM
Thanks stephen :] x
Emo Pictures - JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
JojoCupcakeKillerrxD
Posts: 1222
Jan 09 2011, 11:45 AM
That's so depressing :'''( *hug*
RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Jan 13 2011, 11:25 AM
Thanks
ChocolateBubbles
Posts: 163
Jan 13 2011, 12:00 PM
It made me cry :< I just hope if my real dad dies before I meet him...He goes to hell and burns -.-' My step-dad is going to perv heaven xD
RiRi-Rawwwrr
Posts: 2152
Jan 13 2011, 12:05 PM
Hmm the truth hurts i could say
ChocolateBubbles
Posts: 163
Jan 13 2011, 12:07 PM
So does the lies my fricking mum told me -.-'

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